Technology may be advancing in the world that we live in
today, but does that mean that our schools should adopt technology to take over
the task of grading papers written by their students? Surprisingly, there are
some good arguments supporting these Robo-Readers; however, I'm not a fan of having robots take over grading. With
the use of Robo-readers, the writers and teachers will experience an
insufficient quality of grading and a decline in skill and uniqueness. The main
problem revolves around what is chosen to be graded and what is not.
Robo-Readers
are programmed to analyze only certain aspects of writing. These e-raters have
features that analyze “proportion of grammar errors,” “proportion of usage
errors,” “organization and development,” and more (Source C). At first, it may
seem that these features may be all that is needed to grade a paper
effectively, but what about the true content? According to Michael Winerip of
the New York Times, one of the
biggest known problems “is that it can’t identify truth. He tells students not
to waste time worrying about whether their facts are accurate, since pretty
much any fact will do as long as it is incorporated into a well-structured
sentence”(Source B). Since when is it okay to only grade one half
of the quality of a paper. Writing should not be only analyzed based on the
fundamental writing rules; ideas, accuracy, and substance should all matter as
well. Furthermore, certain stylistic elements like short sentences and short paragraphs are looked down upon as
undesirable for a good paper.
With this idea of only accepting
certain styles and only grading certain aspects of writing, there is a concern
with whether or not writing will excel in the future. If students’ papers are
continually graded by a Robo-reader, those students will learn to write by focusing
on what the robots want and not what is actually a well-written paper. Melissa
Block interviewed Michael Winerip, who said, “…a lot of juice of the English
language is going to disappear…you’re going to get a more and more homogenized
form of writing when the joy of writing is surprise” (Source E). By creating an
atmosphere in which students only write to receive good grades from the robots,
the uniqueness of writing disappears.
The use of Robo-readers may be more
efficient, but it will not help our development of writing in the future. With
these robots, our unique styles and skills will be cast aside, and aspects that
are seemingly unimportant will be graded instead of content and accuracy.
Robo-readers aren't the greatest idea, and I hope that there are some changes before we
utilize them.
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